You “play” as the main character, Andrea, a tomboy who is pretty lazy. Apparently, your land is in extreme danger, but you don’t know what to do. (The reason why “play” is in quotations is because in this episode, you don’t actually interact with anything in the episode. But in the future, you will!) (This is kind of an attempt at a half-webseries half-videogame. Give me some recommendations if you want!)
What’s a tomboy?
JSYK, you do not need to broadcast messages for every interaction: The TELL block executes a set of instructions within the context of another Sprite.
Anyways, cool project!
Mmm, makes sense.
Oh, good to know! I didn’t even know it was a thing if I had to be honest.
Great beginning! I’m looking forward to seeing the puzzles. :~)
One tiny little suggestion: After Ruby appears, maybe put in a tiny wait, like maybe 0.2 second, before Andrea reacts to her.
Also, I was a little confused by the dialog, because Ruby says she’s going to help Andrea, but then it’s Andrea who’s fighting, so it feels more like Andrea helping Ruby. I think the text should make it clearer what their roles are, e.g., if Ruby says “there’s a ghoul who wants to take over your land” it would be clearer that it’s Andrea’s fight.
oh, ok! my grammar is still not the best so thanks for the advice! 
I have no clue if I should put this in a separate post or not, but does anyone have any ideas for episode two? (Note: There’s a chance I will take inspiration but not insert the entire idea.)